Hello! I have to write an essay in 45 mins on Animal farm on Tuesday. I wrote a practice essay (untimed) and I feel like its too long for me to write in 45 mins. I think I've done multiple things wrong but I'm not quite sure what. My introduction and conclusion are also quite short, but I don't know how to expand them. If anyone is willing to read the essay and give me some feedback I'd really appreciate it!
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