Feedback on Hamlet essay? (1 Viewer)

[A Leaf]

Hey! Could anyone who is doing/did very well in English Advanced be kind enough to give me some feedback (you're allowed to be as harsh as you want, I encourage you to unleash your inner Regina George) on my Hamlet essay? I have half-yearlies coming up and I would love to have some general critique on the way I write. The question is made up btw. I could email it to you (maybe PM me your email?)

 

[MrSir]

Hey! Could anyone who is doing/did very well in English Advanced be kind enough to give me some feedback (you're allowed to be as harsh as you want, I encourage you to unleash your inner Regina George) on my Hamlet essay? I have half-yearlies coming up and I would love to have some general critique on the way I write. The question is made up btw. I could email it to you (maybe PM me your email?)

Im a teacher I will do it for you . see your private message