Selling the EXACT English Advanced Essays that I wrote in the 2022 HSC - 94 External - 99.40 ATAR (1 Viewer)

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I'm selling the exact essays I wrote in the external HSC word for word - costing me $86 to get it back which are now in a word document (1.1k words each essay).

My Credentials:
- 99.40 ATAR, graduated from Sydney Boys High School
- 5th in State for Music 1
- All Rounders / Top Achiever
- Elite Athlete (4 bonus points from UNSW)

Raw Marks:
Common Module (1984 by George Orwell) - 19.5/20
Module A (Jane Campion's "Bright Star" and Keat's "When I Have Fears", "Bright Star") - 18.5/20
Module B (King Henry IV by Shakespeare) - 17.5/20
Module C (5 Mark Analytical and a 15 Mark Discursive on shared fulfilment) - 18.5/20

Pricing:
*All purchases also include my prepared essay (post-trials), responding to SBHS 2021 Trial Quetions so you can see how I have adapted it in the HSC
*Purchasing Module C includes prepared discursive, creative and reflection for both
AND external discursive and analytical
- 1 Module $20
- 2 Modules $30 ($15 each)
- 3 Modules $40 (~$13 each)
- All for $50 ($12.5 each)

Reply, PM or email zak2227@gmail.com for enquiries

I was always terrible at English, ranking in the 130s for each internal assessment. I then realised exactly what was dragging me down - my adapatation to questions were trash because my essay itself was restricting me. Thus after improving that I received 51/193 in trials and my overall rank for english jumped to 108/193. As my school only gets about 40 band 6s, my chance to get a b6 was slim but I improved my essays to be extremely adaptive to scrape a 94 external with 85 internals, thus clutching a band 6 for english (one of 44 people who did receive b6 at my school this year).



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Short Answer 16/20
Common Module 19.5/20
Module A 18.5/20
Module B 17.5/20
Module C 4.5/5 + 14/15 (18.5/20)
90 raw scaled to 94

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53 pages 😅
 

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