who wants to rip into my ENGL218 piece? (1 Viewer)

[glitterfairy]

I feel I'm pretty close to finishing but I haven't had any "extensive" changes since first draft... if anyone has some time free, could you give it a read and critique it for me?

It's only 1 200 words so won't take you long to whip through - plus it's creative writing so it won't require too many braincells

 

[clairegirl]

I feel I'm pretty close to finishing but I haven't had any "extensive" changes since first draft... if anyone has some time free, could you give it a read and critique it for me?

It's only 1 200 words so won't take you long to whip through - plus it's creative writing so it won't require too many braincells

Hrrm i would but im sorta busy.. maybe if u cud post it on BOS, we cud have a looksie and see if we cud help but nahh pple might plagarise it hehe

 

[glitterfairy]

lol, yup.

I spent all of yesterday writing a story that I thought wasn't as good as another pre-written piece... so finally started reworking that second piece late last night.

Just showed both pieces to someone else in the course, and they like the one I spent all of yesterday on.

I don't know which one to pick! gah! lol

 

[iambored]

you can PM them to me if you like but realise that i have no ability when it comes to creative writing so i wouldn't be looking at it from the view of someone who knows what makes a good story.

 

[glitterfairy]

will do

Any kind of feedback is good!


In other news, three different critiquers have all preferred the story I thought I wasted my time on, so I've changed my focus to that now