"Your response lacks textual detail, you tend to give a generalised description of what happens rather than provide a solid analysis.
You must remember to provide the names of your composers in your introduction and organise your ideas more effectively - your response lacks structure, you must...
As the title states, in any extended response I write my marks don't reflect how much study I put in.
I have a great study routine going and put in several hours per day. I can analyse the texts well, I remember the quotes perfectly and I'm using the PEEL structure for all my responses. My...