ONLY if it's in character and relevant to whatever scene (mainly for emotional impact).
And I wouldn't go overboard with it either.
example: part of my MW is from the perspective of a Red Army officer, and I was reading this memoirs from an eyewitness of someone who'd lived with the red army...
post it in the BoS 2009 showcase in the Major Works section. ==> http://community.boredofstudies.org/608/major-works/219421/bos-showcase-2009-major-works.html
Hi!
I am planning to do Extension 2 next year (well, more like next term :o) and I have a question about my Major Work.
Recently this year, I have written a short story for my English class...as part of an assessment task. Apparently it received REALLY good feedback from everyone who's read it...