Recent content by Draik

Nobody else seems to be posting, so here's mine. It's a little dark/dystopic towards the middle but it ends happily. [edit] It was pretty long so I put it onto Google Docs, you can find it here.

When I started, we'd (there are... were? two of us doing it, and yes, we would often meet at the same time) have a meeting every two weeks or so just so our teacher could go through and comment on our journals and catch up with our changes. He got sick over the summer holidays so we got another...

The last line of my epilogue is 'Smiling, she turns and walks back into the gallery; back into her home.' The last sentence of the main story is 'I know my name.'

1. Title. Sententia. Until about 1am this morning it was Others, but that was really just the working title. 2. Character Name. Raven. 3. Guys? Girls? There are 5 characters whose names are mentioned, two of them are girls and the other three are guys. 4. Setting. An art gallery. 5. Genre...

"I look up..."

Oh, god no. :haha: It's a dystopic speculative fiction piece.

Eh, here we go. They're pretty long sentences. I look up at the early morning sky above me, tiny smudges of white framing the magnificent indigo, spanning out past the buildings around me and toward the red dawn horizon. A soft breeze picks up, lifting the leaves from the warming sidewalk...