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    conditioning

    hi, im doing an assignment on the elements that need to be considered when designing a training session and i dont understand what conditioning. Could someone please explain it to me. Thanks
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    Harder questions

    can people please post some hard questions that incorporate various topics in one coz our teacher said that our half yearly exam questions were going to be like that and i cant find any that are like that
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    Belonging Creative Writing Ideas

    my story based around someone who doesnt belong in school (so original) but even still, i still got good marks for it (17/20) because my teacher said markers are more concerned about the language and techniques you use to convey the idea of belonging rather than the story itself. Although the...
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    About the Belonging Short story

    "You have to signpost that he's thinking something." Not 100% what you mean by this. Does that mean you write something like he believed or he thought before you actually write what hes thinking. Eg: He believed that school should allow people to create their own thoughts and opinions, but...
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    About the Belonging Short story

    im thinking that the main character only has thoughts throughout the majority of the novel. Then towards then end he breaks his silence. Hopefully it shows how he doesn't belong to school, but still belongs to himself. Also if its in third person when i talk about his thoughts do i use quotation...
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    About the Belonging Short story

    just standard English.
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    About the Belonging Short story

    Probably more of a deep character. When i finish would i be able to PM u a copy of it to read over and see if its alright. I really want to nail the short story coz i usually suck at the unseen text part (7/15 for my half yearly exam)
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    About the Belonging Short story

    Yea i hate second person anyway, confuses the hell out of me when im trying to write something in second person. Would it better to include his thoughts to show character development
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    About the Belonging Short story

    Just wondering is it possible to write the story in third person without the protagonist actually saying anything aloud and still get a good mark (13+) Thanks in advance
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    Business studies syllabus

    it was not until a week ago that i learnt that memorizing the syllabus was important for this subject. For some reason our teacher did not place any emphasis on learning the syllabus. I was wondering how much of the syllabus you have learnt and any acronyms, tips that would help me out. I'm...
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    Question regarding choice of related texts.

    Our prescribed text is The Crucible by Arthur Miller, and I was wondering whether the related texts I use must be related to the themes explored in the play? The related texts that I am currently debating over are: Dead Poets Society Shawshank Redemption The Power of One (novel) Any advice is...
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