- Year
- 2026
- Type
- Assessment Task
ik it's early for prelim content but i got a 20/20 with this essay on briar rose last year, lowk wasn't bothered to type it out but it's more helpful to if you see the feedback anyway
- i did use a quote that had a slur in it (context of question felt it was a stronger quote to use, not used in a harmful way or anything but still watch out)
- the things i was advised to do (outside of the written feedback) was aim for 3 paragraphs in year 12 - but in prelims two longer, stronger paragraphs worked fine for me
also just wanted to show you that quality is majorly more important than quantity - i wrote 4 pages and got full marks, other people wrote 6+ and got less. don't stress yourself out if you feel like you're not writing enough, just write all your information and analysis out and you'll be fine
i also want to point out that one thing i got really high praise for was the theme sentence and the constant referral back to it - theme sentences are seriously important, would HIGHLY recommend working on them if you're not stronger in them rn)
hope this helps in any way !!
- i did use a quote that had a slur in it (context of question felt it was a stronger quote to use, not used in a harmful way or anything but still watch out)
- the things i was advised to do (outside of the written feedback) was aim for 3 paragraphs in year 12 - but in prelims two longer, stronger paragraphs worked fine for me
also just wanted to show you that quality is majorly more important than quantity - i wrote 4 pages and got full marks, other people wrote 6+ and got less. don't stress yourself out if you feel like you're not writing enough, just write all your information and analysis out and you'll be fine
i also want to point out that one thing i got really high praise for was the theme sentence and the constant referral back to it - theme sentences are seriously important, would HIGHLY recommend working on them if you're not stronger in them rn
)hope this helps in any way !!
