Dude...you're way off.
This kid has massive potential for mid 80's and even 90's.
If his external marks are good (band 5's and 6's), 90+ isn't unlikely.
I doubt you can change marks =\
That'd cause so much confusion and you'd have people trying to scab 1 mark to move up ranks or whatever. It'd be very stupid of them to let you appeal actual MARKS.
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Body - Do what Absolutezero suggested:
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Have you tried to do anything with any of your hot guy friends? Made any moves, implied things? If so, what was their reaction? If not, are you scared? tbh, you're not bad looking...you just gotta put yourself out there I guess.
They can't change the marks. The marks are used to determine the ranks so they're gonna assume that the marks are all correct...there's no way of changing them.
I'm pretty that it's just for clerical errors.
For example, if it it had "5/25" but I actually came 3rd, then they'd recheck the...