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No, actually, it isn't just that. You are inexperienced writers. You haven't got the basics down. After you understand how to make a normal story work, you move on to experiments.

lolwut.

Eh, I guess. I didn't do that subject.

"Have you ever been bullied because of a physical characteristic?" At the moment you are asking if their opinion of themselves has caused bullying.

Love exists, sillyfaces.

:shy:

1) How old are you? 18 2) Are you happy with you body image? Yes 3) If answered No, please state why? 4) If you could change anything about yourself, what would you change? Other (Please state) Feet. 5) Do you read ‘Female’ aimed magazines? No 6) If answered yes, please circle...

Impossible.

Try to have more than one person in your story. It forces you to ground your writing into real moments. Which is what engages your audience. It's actually really hard to (skillfully) convey meaningful interactions with inanimate objects. You need a strong, unique voice.

Eh, a much less long-winded argument is as follows: Do you believe in predetermination? If yes, then any sin you have committed is really the work of your God. If no, do you believe God created everything and everyone in this world? Yes? Then he created the exact circumstances for...

Yeah, you don't have to do a short story. But a marker will look at that piece as a short story, and mark it down.

uh, troll.

Actually, it's not a narrative, Aerath. It's just a flow of consciousness, reflecting on the past without saying anything in particular. dragon rider, you need to add interactions. There is no plot, and that is why you don't have a narrative. It's pretty, but it's not a story. The thing...

I'm waiting until I'm married. It's a mark of respect for my God, and my partner.

tis, but this seems like a job for risole91.

I wear clothes. Whatever looks okay, and is washed.

Actually, it is probably due to the fact that contemporary literature has moved towards brevity and clarity. For example, merely a few decades lie between George Orwell and Virginia Woolf. I have seen a 10 line sentence in Orlando. Somehow she manages to make it work. <3 Virginia Woolf.

Hey, all people have opinions. I personally cannot make it through Huckleberry Finn. It's also remarked on as one of the greatest books of all time. Until Tolkien was all "HEY GUYS I LIKE BEOWULF, IT'S COMPLETE AND SHIZ", no one credited it as anything more than a vague collection of ramblings...

I've read that before. 8.5/10. Early paragraphing and sentences are all long, and need variation. Too much emphasis on particular dates of the year - the first sentence should probably be replaced with a slight variation of the first in the second paragraph. The idea is original, and the...

Doesn't matter. I'm studying writing, not Belonging.