did anyone else notice in the text 3 comprehension of the area of study advanced english paper that the girl started off saying "i look around at all the ugly people in the world and think how they're making it a worser place"
edit: i misquoted it, and just realised what it meant:"She...
hey i've been told numerous times that my writing is way too convoluted and needs to be a lot more succinct. i've been trying really really hard but apparently i'm still waffling. does nayone have any suggestions on how i can address this issue?
thanks