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    Belonging - Creative Writing Draft

    i agree love, it is a lil long.. maybe shorten it by a few hunderd words.. mines 1150... you need to make it flow a lil more.. instead of i did this, i did that, i did this.. if u get me? try not say 'belonging' too.. make it a lil more ambiguous. if your finding all this too hard to...
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