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thanks for the advice,i'm listening to you and taking this as constructive critiscm :) smiles...

i never said i was amazing at poetry,i was trying to be encouraging because this person has gotten some mean comments.i won't try to explain that to you though because obviously encouragement and kindness are foreign concepts to you... in fact i bet you're so detached that what I'm writing won't...

awwww,thank you,you just made my day!:haha:

um,i wasn't refering to you,i was refering to the person who originally made that comment,just so you know...

yes it is.you need to be more specific.is what i wrote bad,the girl's poem bad or my poetic attempt at humour? and if your answer is all of this,then thank you,you've officially killed my day.

what do you mean by that?

Roses are red, Violets are blue, This poem is fine,but...ha ha ha, I bet you thought I'd whinge too! I think this is a good effort. I think it's not bad for year 10, i am in year 10 too!(lol). Don't put yourself down,people will always have opinions and feel the need to express them,say thanks...