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  1. jazzythezoo

    Any Helpers??

    Hey there, I went to an english extension 2 conference late last year and it was strongly suggested we give our pieces to around 20 different people to edit, look over, suggest anything to improve the story, give constructive criticism (without being too harsh) and also pointing out any good...
  2. jazzythezoo

    First three sentences....

    here goes... It was like a conversation, where no one stops to breathe. And then we silenced. A pause. *bites lip* bring it!
  3. jazzythezoo

    material suggestions for bow

    lol the syringe idea im already doing!! funny how great minds think alike ;) i was gonna do mints and laquer them so they cant disintergrate, but i remembered i cant use food :( i will look up the pill maker thing for sure thank you guys so so so much!! x
  4. jazzythezoo

    material suggestions for bow

    hey there, for my body of work i am designing 6 different shoes since shoes are my obsession and i am translating societal obsessions through my own. For example i have a sex shoe, a war shoe, a money shoe... for my drug shoe i wanted to use fake pills like panadol pills and design them in...
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    another ATAR estimate plz :)

    ermm...i found its ranked 150 from 2008?
  6. jazzythezoo

    another ATAR estimate plz :)

    English Advanced (5/24) Ancient History (5/21) Community and Family Studies (CAFS) (2/19) English Extension (2/4) English Extension (1/2) Visual Arts (2/8) people say my subjects scale really sh*t... :( would like an estimate hoping for hmm....90+? :D
  7. jazzythezoo

    spartan land...kleros or kleroi?

    many thanks!
  8. jazzythezoo

    spartan land...kleros or kleroi?

    i still dont get it? is one plural form and the other singular? or do they both mean different things?
  9. jazzythezoo

    Skull quotes needed!!

    please anything!?? with or without techniques i just desperately need them!!
  10. jazzythezoo

    stressing on not stressing!

    ye ur right stuff em
  11. jazzythezoo

    stressing on not stressing!

    hey guys, ok so im pretty comfortable with year 12, im doing 10 units, have 3 major projects to complete(eng ext2, art major, cafs irp), i write study notes everyday (summary of what i did in class everyday), since dropping 2 subjects i have many free periods where i will complete all...
  12. jazzythezoo

    avoiding cliche

    read and watched lolita...great stuff in my opinion and read up on oedipus and did a small amount of reading on frued last year for advanced, another reason why i thought it was a good idea to write about it seeing as ive already did quite a bit of reading on it.
  13. jazzythezoo

    avoiding cliche

    well, yesterday was my viva voce, and my teacher was looking throuhg my journal and came across another idea i had in the past about a relationship with a guy 4 years older than me, and she fell inlove with the story and is trying to push it more that way. i pretty much have the story, its...
  14. jazzythezoo

    avoiding cliche

    omg that is fantastic! i wish my family could inspire me liek that...i love the pulling from the clouds idea, seriously great stuff! art express material for sure in my opinion!! well my work is based on obsession. im communicating societies obsessions through my own; shoes! so im using six...
  15. jazzythezoo

    avoiding cliche

    wow! that is certainly a coincidence, ur doing visual arts, slightly off topic, but id love to know what you're doing for your major?
  16. jazzythezoo

    avoiding cliche

    *feeling muuuuchhhh better now* :), umm national art school? no, but by the sound of it i wish i did :P why do you ask?
  17. jazzythezoo

    avoiding cliche

    yes thats exactly what im kind of going for, im trying to you abuse as a tool to venture into other ideas connecting to relationships, love, affection and mainly trust. making a bit of sense now?
  18. jazzythezoo

    avoiding cliche

    i understand exactly where you guys are coming from, the thing is this was my initial idea because ive always had an urge to explore incestual abuse and i thought this might be a good opportunity to do so. then i was told by a few that its too cliche and i know nothing about it (teachers are...
  19. jazzythezoo

    avoiding cliche

    hey guys, ok so for my short story im writing about incest...yeah sick i know, but with the few books i have found to help me with my research, im finding my ideas seem to be fairly familliar. is there anything i can do to avoid making it sound like just another story without changing my idea...
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