Well the situation is i'm studying advanced and i'm currently finding it quite mind boggling. Achieveing only a B in my dramatic monologue i had written a week earlier, i decided to upload the progress of my second task onto BOS to get some opinions from those that have/are doing their HSC course.
The task is a letter to the Sydney Morning Herald outlining why and how I[(persona of Geoff Parr - Producer of the National Picture) - HSC AOS Stimulus for HSC] satirised 'The Conciliatoin'<Another painting.
Any feedback would be great. I'll continue uploading and posting updates as i complete the task.
[and also a general question. If you do a task, is it best you complete the WHOLE task before going back and editing etc. e.g.If you think you have a bad idea. or is it best to complete the task then view what you've written as a whole?]
EDIT: I just also thought. Should i include some background information of the first painting (conciliation) before saying that it is superficial?
The task is a letter to the Sydney Morning Herald outlining why and how I[(persona of Geoff Parr - Producer of the National Picture) - HSC AOS Stimulus for HSC] satirised 'The Conciliatoin'<Another painting.
Any feedback would be great. I'll continue uploading and posting updates as i complete the task.
[and also a general question. If you do a task, is it best you complete the WHOLE task before going back and editing etc. e.g.If you think you have a bad idea. or is it best to complete the task then view what you've written as a whole?]
EDIT: I just also thought. Should i include some background information of the first painting (conciliation) before saying that it is superficial?
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