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"AIDS (Acquired Immunodeficiency Syndrome) is an infectious disease caused by the retrovirus HIV (Human Immunodeficiency Virus). It basically destroys the body's immune system, leaving it susceptible to other opportunistic infections or diseases.
The cause of AIDS is HIV. When a person contracts HIV, HIV particles invade CD4+ T lymphocytes and use the cells' own genetic material to produce billions of new HIV particles. These new particles cause the infected CD4 cell to burst (lyse). The new particles can then enter the bloodstream and infect other cells. Once someone is infected with HIV, their number of normal CD4 cells continues to decrease. However, not long after infection, the body's immune system increases CD8+ T lymphocytes and antibodies which dramatically reduce HIV levels and allow CD4+ T lymphocytes to remultiply (but never back to their original levels). This is temporary only with the virus using elusion mechanisms to hide in reservoirs such as the chromosomes and also mutating rapidly. Thus eventually upon destroying enough CD4+ T lymphocytes, the person's immune system will be so weak that AIDS will be diagnosed.
HIV is transmitted mainly through direct bodily fluid or mucous membrane contact with an infected individual. This can include blood, semen, vaginal fluid, preseminal fluid, and breast milk. Generally, the activities associated with HIV transmission are unprotected anal, vaginal or oral sex, blood transfusion, contaminated needles, exchange between mother and baby during pregnancy, childbirth, or breastfeeding, or other exposure to one of the above bodily fluids. However, the use of a condom during sexual intercourse can lower the risk of HIV by up to 80%.
Because AIDS breaks down the body's immune system allowing for other opportunistic infections and diseases to target the body, it provokes many symptoms characteristic of other diseases. HIV infection has no symptoms or causes only a flu-like illness with many of the following symptoms: fever, sore throat, rash, nausea and vomiting, diarrhoea, fatigue, swollen lymph nodes, muscle aches, headaches and joint pain.
While currently there are no cures for HIV/AIDS, combination treatment plans are available to slow the disease. These include the HAART (Highly Active Anti-Retroviral Therapy) which suppress the virus’s replication. Due to the temporary nature of these treatments, they must be administered regularly to ensure effectiveness.
Prevention of HIV/AIDS is relatively simple in first world countries. Each is based on the principle of preventing the sharing of infected bodily fluids mentioned above. Basic steps include the use of a condom, which studies show reduces transmission of the virus by up to 80%. Another measure would be to eliminate the sharing of materials require to take drugs such as syringes and cotton balls. Finally, the probability of mother-to-child transmission can be greatly decreased (from 25% to just 1%) through the use of antiretroviral therapy in the weeks before a caesarean section birth.
Control mechanisms to retard the spread of AIDS include education programs to inform people of dangerous behaviour and to dispel the social stigma associated with HIV/AIDS. Particularly in the economically disadvantaged countries, potential steps such as providing condoms free of charge and investing in needle exchange programs would stem the spread of HIV/AIDS. However many third world countries lack the financial and intellectual resources to deal with this pandemic, making it
difficult to contain the spread."