area of study essay - HELP NEEDED DESPERATELY (1 Viewer)

[melllyy]

my practice essay question in preparation for half yearlies is...."to what extent has studying the concept of imaginative journeys, expanded your understanding of yourself, of individuals and of the world?"

i have handed in sooo many essays to my teacher and it is now a high B range mark and she said for it to get into the A range i need to emphasise more on my personal response as that is what the question is asking. but i am finding it hard to write more about my personal response.... SOOOO how do i add more of a persoanl response??

anyyyyy ideasssss?

 

[melllyy]

noooooooo help????

 

[Mountain.Dew]

personal response would mean being a bit more analytical when u discuss ur texts, and also to draw more conclusions from those discussions. it is also good to say if u disagree/agree with any of the ideas shown in the texts. how do you feel about the texts? what emotions does the texts conjure up inside you when you read them?

hopefully this helps, M.D.

 

[melllyy]

thanks that has helped!

 

[Mountain.Dew]

a pleasure