BELONGING - creative writing - from heaven (1 Viewer)

[emmy26]

hii, just doing a practice creative writing piece and have come up with an idea about a girl (from 1st person perspective) who has just had her life support switched off and is retelling her story from heaven. She feels as if she doesnt belong in heaven and obviously deserves to be living back on earth, shes 17.
Would this relate strongly enough to the idea os belonging/not belonging do you think?
Any ideas would be great, thanks

 

[lychnobity]

Works, it's simple enough as a short story and can be "complicated" if need be.

BUT it rests largely on how you present/write it. If you can't characterise her properly, chuck whatever hope you have out the window.