Belonging essays? (1 Viewer)

[thatchloechick]

just wondering if anyone has gotten back essays for belonging with good marks? i'd like to have a read so i can work out how to improve mine.
thanks! x

 

[annabackwards]

I got good marks for my essay but i don't exactly want to show it to anyone seeing as i am going to sit the HSC this year... maybe next year XD

Basically mine was just a well argued essay with the thesis being something along the lines of "An individual can only feel a sense of inclusion when they overcome the obstacle of acceptance." So, just have a strong thesis and argue it as well as possible