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[FadeToBlack]

I was just wondering if i could post an essay of mine up here, and maybe get it 'marked', checked out a bit, improvements suggested?
Its the Trial essay question, and I'm gonna take my essay and modify it, given the teachers comments and my own notes

The question was/is: "Of its nature, Crime Fiction invites the active participation of responders.
Compare the ways in which any two of the prescribed texts and any two related texts of your own choosing do this.""

I remember McLake making an offer of this sort a while ago, is all, and any help would be really appreciated :apig:

 

[McLake]

Yes, I would be happy to read your essay. I you are uncomfortable about letting everyone see it then "PM" or email it to me.

And thankyou for saying that I am "accomplished" ...

 

[FadeToBlack]

Thanks a lot man, i'll either PM it to you or just post it up here probably tomorrow im guessing
is that ok?
Thanks again :apig:

 

[iambored]

Originally posted by FadeToBlack
I was just wondering if i could post an essay of mine up here, and maybe get it 'marked', checked out a bit, improvements suggested?
Its the Trial essay question, and I'm gonna take my essay and modify it, given the teachers comments and my own notes

The question was/is: "Of its nature, Crime Fiction invites the active participation of responders.
Compare the ways in which any two of the prescribed texts and any two related texts of your own choosing do this.""

I remember McLake making an offer of this sort a while ago, is all, and any help would be really appreciated :apig:

yeah that was the trial. u've definately already done it??

 

[FadeToBlack]

Originally posted by iambored
yeah that was the trial. u've definately already done it??

lol
yes, i did it last monday, the 11th
Don't worry i'm not trying to cheat the system

 

[FadeToBlack]

It was a crap mark, hence me hoping to improve it a lot by HSC time

 

[iambored]

Originally posted by FadeToBlack
lol
yes, i did it last monday, the 11th
Don't worry i'm not trying to cheat the system

haha ok well people can never be sure
y the hell did u do the exam on a monday though????

 

[FadeToBlack]

teachers changed the date so it wasnt on the same day as advanced
pretty nice of them i thought

 

[Huy]

I love that avatar... it seems like an endless loop, with her doing that all day long. ("we need more film!!")

haha

 

[FadeToBlack]

Originally posted by Huy
I love that avatar... it seems like an endless loop, with her doing that all day long. ("we need more film!!")

haha

hehe yeah it does, i'd feel sorry for her after a while, all that friction

if you look closely enough you can see where they like 'joined' the animation - yeh, maybe i've been watching too closely

 

[FadeToBlack]

Right hand, 1st finger to be exact

 

[iambored]

Originally posted by FadeToBlack
Right hand, 1st finger to be exact

wow how close have u been looking??/ hahaha it's so true though

 

[Jimmi]

Fade to black are you going to post your essay cuz i'd be interested to see what direction other people took that question in.

 

[FadeToBlack]

Yeh i may as well post it up in here when i'm done

I shouldn't have said i was gonna have written it 'tomorrow' in my talkings with McLake, it's more like "in a couple of weeks"

 

[McLake]

Originally posted by FadeToBlack
Yeh i may as well post it up in here when i'm done

I shouldn't have said i was gonna have written it 'tomorrow' in my talkings with McLake, it's more like "in a couple of weeks"

That's OK, I thought you had forgotten.

Post when ready, and depending on how busy I am, I will try to get feedback to you within 2 days ...

 

[coroneos]

Originally posted by FadeToBlack
I was just wondering if i could post an essay of mine up here, and maybe get it 'marked', checked out a bit, improvements suggested?
Its the Trial essay question, and I'm gonna take my essay and modify it, given the teachers comments and my own notes

The question was/is: "Of its nature, Crime Fiction invites the active participation of responders.
Compare the ways in which any two of the prescribed texts and any two related texts of your own choosing do this.""

I remember McLake making an offer of this sort a while ago, is all, and any help would be really appreciated :apig:

How good is McLake at 3u english?

 

[Rahul]

band 6

 

[McLake]

Originally posted by Rahul
band 6

Band E4 actually (highest EXTENSION Band).