Comments/Advice for Section 2 AOS (1 Viewer)

[sunjet]

Hi, need help for section 2 aos, the creative writing.

Please posts your comments/advice/how to improve and a mark out of 15.

http://www.sunjet.netlogistics.com.au/upload/store/Section 2 - AOS.doc

 

[nwatts]

Can you give me the question? As well as the mark you were awarded?

 

[ifsonotso_100]

Nwatt, can you possibly post up the short story which you got 15 out of 15

 

[nwatts]

I've got your PMs, buddy. I'm trying to find it. For some reason it's vanished from this PC, and by webspace is down. So hold in there!

 

[ifsonotso_100]

sorry mate, i really need help for creative and by reading good ones i can hopefully see how to write good ones for myself.