Creative story? (2 Viewers)

[Ballinnn]

Hi guys was just wondering if anyone could give me feedback on my creative writing story? My assessments in two weeks and i just did one so i can eventually mold it into the stimulus. Would be appreciated heaps.

 

[Traveller0901]

I don't think you attached your story with the thread..

 

[DamTameNaken]

I'll read it if you send it.

 

[LoveHateSchool]

I'll read it if you PM me.

 

[funstudy]

Just remember key tips e.g. explore a concept of belonging, use language features, have a motif (if possible), link back to stimulus (note stimulus is only meant to do that- stimulate a story, therefore although you need to maintain a strong link you do not have to bang the concept ofbelonging onto the marker's head) and note key aspects of belonging in the syllabus: to place, people. community, identity, choice

 

[Kat92]

Hi guys was just wondering if anyone could give me feedback on my creative writing story? My assessments in two weeks and i just did one so i can eventually mold it into the stimulus. Would be appreciated heaps.

I will link you to a forum whereby one of my old posts may help: http://community.boredofstudies.org/showthread.php?t=241974&highlight=creative