crucible essay english advanced (1 Viewer)

[Z4zea]

how do i mould my generic or base essay that i made for the Crucible into the question asked i struggle with that a lot and idk what to change in my essay to make it link to the question so NEED SOME TIPS PLS (got a test in a few days so i need to knowwww)

 

[nazifa.ss]

For a band 6 honestly, you need to identify the how and cause so how they will see the world differently, and in what manner? does it change their perspective? does it show something through a different light? from the audience's perspective. Depending on the question and what it asks you identify how the questions show this in TC for example if it's the 2024 question identify what it's saying; motivations, emotions, and actions right so use that for each body. You identify and define those three and how complex relationships nuance these components. Then explain it from the author's point and use wider implications. For mine, I talked about how oppressive boundaries, dismantle moral liberty and through the sacrifice of individual integrity, Miller redefines moral liberation, showing that true freedom from societal forces comes only through ultimate sacrifice.

 

[Z4zea]

For a band 6 honestly, you need to identify the how and cause so how they will see the world differently, and in what manner? does it change their perspective? does it show something through a different light? from the audience's perspective. Depending on the question and what it asks you identify how the questions show this in TC for example if it's the 2024 question identify what it's saying; motivations, emotions, and actions right so use that for each body. You identify and define those three and how complex relationships nuance these components. Then explain it from the author's point and use wider implications. For mine, I talked about how oppressive boundaries, dismantle moral liberty and through the sacrifice of individual integrity, Miller redefines moral liberation, showing that true freedom from societal forces comes only through ultimate sacrifice.

hi nazifa LOL and thanks for this

 

[nazifa.ss]

nwss

 

[gammahydroxybutyrate]

how do i mould my generic or base essay that i made for the Crucible into the question asked i struggle with that a lot and idk what to change in my essay to make it link to the question so NEED SOME TIPS PLS (got a test in a few days so i need to knowwww)

i am the biggest advocate against having generic, pre-written or prepared essays for hsc english. by the point you learn to 'adapt' your essay to the question properly (most prewritten essay enjoyers never will) you may as well just write an essay.

if you're settling for like 15-16/20 on a good day, go nuts. if you actually want to do well in the subject its a recipe for disaster, because all it takes is one left field question and your hsc is over. essay questions are still questions, and unless you get the exact same prompt or stimulus as what you prepared for, the range of reasonable answers will vary. otherwise, substituting your quotes to fit the question, corresponding analysis and arguments works, but again, thats just writing another essay.

 

[tigerian]

For a band 6 honestly, you need to identify the how and cause so how they will see the world differently, and in what manner? does it change their perspective? does it show something through a different light? from the audience's perspective. Depending on the question and what it asks you identify how the questions show this in TC for example if it's the 2024 question identify what it's saying; motivations, emotions, and actions right so use that for each body. You identify and define those three and how complex relationships nuance these components. Then explain it from the author's point and use wider implications. For mine, I talked about how oppressive boundaries, dismantle moral liberty and through the sacrifice of individual integrity, Miller redefines moral liberation, showing that true freedom from societal forces comes only through ultimate sacrifice.

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