ENGLISH FEEDBACK (2 Viewers)

[makkapakka1234]

Hi! Im in Year 12 currently and I have to create an essay on an unseen stimilus question on "All the Ligh We Cannot See". Im giving myself a deadline to get the draft completed by this Friday.
I was hoping someone can be an angel and read through the draft and give me feedback before I hand it in to my teacher. By the way I'm only allowed to hand in a paragraph and not the whole essay which is quite sad
Anyways Thank You!!
Also any general tips on how to ace Advanced English will also be appreciated )

 

[thelitNerd]

Heyyy. In English advanced, the focus is always to explicitly answer the question, provide a consistent thesis, and support your point with relevant evidence. Obviously quality trumps quantity, but to reach a certain mark, quantity is also important as there are many non-negotiable aspects of the text that must be included to get to that top mark. I received a 20/20 in trial for my ATLWCS essay, and I know it's a pretty niche text so im happy to help. Seen as im a 2024 graduate im also offering tutoring for English, so if anyone needs further help feel free to send me a message and we can get started