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Over97

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hi all

i do Aeng, but for some reason, my essay writing skills SUCK
this isnt good as i do lots of subjects that require good writing skills.

is there any way to increase my writing skills?
any specific books i can read? methods etc

any help is most appreciated

thanks all
 

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Well by now you should have been taught the basics of writing an essay...but if you're still unsure, ask your english teachers for a text-type pack...or something like that on essays at least....
Technically, since essays are about developing your own style of answering a question...getting someone else to teach you a style isn't always the best...but it works for some...
There's probably a few decent books out there on it...so go to your public library and just browse around...I've actually seen some around, so you ARE covered...
Other than that, all I can suggest is do a google search on essay writing techniques...
 

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have u tried looking thru bookshops? the hsc resources for essay-writing aren't all too bad, even the yr 9/10 ones are okay.
But i think it's really the content of ur essays, right?
 

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dont bother buying books, just rent them from the library. and make use of one of the best resources available-your TEACHER. ask them what you are doing wrong and how you can improve.
 

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essays are really simple - people just think of them with horror because it involves so much writing.

look at it this way. the most basic structure for an essay - which all GOOD essays follow, goes: intro -> point 1 -> point 2 -> point 3 -> conclusion.

usually you don't have enough time (in an exam situation) to put in more than 3 or 4 points. anything less is too short. anything more is too general - you're not going into enough detail.

so decide what your points will be. say, your essay is about change in society. point 1 could be about multiculturalism, with examples of multiculturalism in schools, in religion, and maybe some statistics comparing 1970 with 2000. you could also bring up some points about how multiculturalism isn't completely embedded in our society yet.

point 2 could be something about feminism. you could compare feminism in the 60s to feminism now. make a point, then justify it.

ditto any other points you want to bring up.

Depending on your nature + skill, you might want to write the introduction first, or you might want to write it last. i tend to write it first because i make up essays as i go along (around that basic structure), but many people leave it and the conclusion to the end.

INTRODUCTION: introduces the points you're going to talk about, IN ORDER. 'Mark' the points by using key words 'The issue of pmulticulturalism...' and don't go into detail - that's what the body of the essay is for.

CONCLUSION: wraps up your essay. you don't always have to restate your points, although if your essay is long you might feel this is necessary to refresh the marker's memory. try and finish it neatly and nicely - if you're running short of time, just FINISH it , don't leave a conclusion unfinished.

other things you have to be wary of in essays are repetition. if you've made a point, don't make it again two paragraphs down - it confuses the reader and they think 'hang on, i've read this before..'. if you think you've written something but you've forgotten, GO BACK AND CHECK. there's no 'can't turn back' policy on writing essays.

if you know you're an atrocious speller, write a shorter essay (or write faster) and go back and check your spelling right at the end. DON'T think 'oh they won't notice' - they WILL. it doesn't matter how good your points are, if you cannot spell 'Peter Skrzynecki' they'll think you don't know your stuff. You're meant to be studying him, after all.

If you're doing the HSC exam - ie, a timed exam situation - and you only have 3 hrs to write three essays, pace yourself. don't write essays which are going to be too long if you KNOW you can't finish in 40 minutes (that's about all the time you'll have). if you don't finish, leave it and move on to the next one. come back when you have time. getting 15/20 for a finished essay and 0/20 for one you didn't get time to start is NOT WORTH IT. getting 10/20 for one and 10/20 for the other is a much more satisfying outcome.

And finally: PRACTISE. you won't get better at writing essays overnight. TIME yourself - make sure you know how much you can write in 40 minutes. be wary of exam paper - the lines are 1cm spaced not 0.9cm like we're all used to (in books). you'll write a lot more in the exam than you're used to.

you don't always have to write essays to practise good essay technique. practise planning them out - look at trial questions and actually physically write out what points you're going to make (and brainstorm points that you COULD make). it's no use doing it 'in your head' - like maths you can't just say 'i know how to do that' and expect to be able to do it in an exam situation!

ok. i'm out of breath :)
any questions?
 

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Originally posted by anti

if you know you're an atrocious speller, write a shorter essay (or write faster) and go back and check your spelling right at the end. DON'T think 'oh they won't notice' - they WILL. it doesn't matter how good your points are, if you cannot spell 'Peter Skrzynecki' they'll think you don't know your stuff. You're meant to be studying him, after all.
you can get away with a few spelling mistakes in other subjects, but not english, always make sure it is spelt right.

if you don't finish, leave it and move on to the next one. come back when you have time. getting 15/20 for a finished essay and 0/20 for one you didn't get time to start is NOT WORTH IT. getting 10/20 for one and 10/20 for the other is a much more satisfying outcome.
yeah, as my teacher said, the easiest 10 marks are the first ones, the hardest ten are the second 10. doing brilliantly on one essay and shit on the others will leave you worse off than three passable ones. just make sure you get those first few marks. and time yourself, give yourself 40 minutes per essay, and once that 40 minutes is up, STOP, and do your next one. if you get time at the end, come back and fix it up
 

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Originally posted by Over97
wow

thanks for the help anti

No probs dude :)


Originally posted by Dash
Shyt!!!

Question!

How can you b bothered writing all this crap down??? :p
I'm a master procrastinator :) I post here instead of doing uni work. ;)

Seriously tho, I love english.. and it's not really hard to do well at it. since it's compulsory i figure everybody should get as good a mark as possible and if i can help them then good :)
 

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anti - u give great help!!

if u don't finish - well i say FINISH, do ALL you can to finish in time, i NEVER have time to come back, maybe even try doing it in 35 mins (coz 4 me, if i plan 2 do it in 35 mins i'll finish in 40mins)
 

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