ext. 2 story help (1 Viewer)

[veronica6535]

ok.. i wrote the ending to my story, and now am kind of working around it.
My teacher thought my ending was comedic.. when it is about like dead bodies.. not sure what was going on..

anyways it's based in Colorado - the state where the columbine massacres happened.. And about a girl who the reader thinks has all these problems like anorexia, mad self image.. as she scaps her food into large gym bags and chucks them into her closet.. but at the end, the gym bags with food actually had dead bodies in there aswell who are her friends.. mm not sure if it's a great concept.. however need help because im not sure if this is too cliche.. and also need some inspiraion.. so if any of u guys know writers who have big twists in the ending can u please tell me them...


thanks heapppssss!!

 

[tanjin]

[FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]"The Murders in the Rue Morgue"[/FONT] [FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]by[/FONT][FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif] Edgar Allan Poe

[/FONT][FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]Read it. It helped me with the "final twist" in my story.[/FONT][FONT=Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif]
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