extended metaphor (1 Viewer)

[Haku]

what is a good extended metaphor to implement into a creative writing task on journeys? a metaphor that extend to the whole of the journey it self, where the metaphor used can associate to each aspect of a journey

 

[silvermoon]

well, its hard to say --> it really depends on the question they ask. the idea youve proposed seems excellent ot me, however, is it possibly to difficult to conceive in 40 minutes under pressure?

 

[Haku]

if not using a extended metaphor what would u compose, what are some lines or connection which run throught the composition?

 

[silvermoon]

u need to focus on building a common theme by using symbols, motifs and imagery throughout the piece. basically, you want a piece of writing that reflects the idea of the journey that you are attempting to demonstrate but without being overly blatant about it. considering the time restraint, its quite often the quality of your writing and how skillfully you've encorporated the message of the piece (ie. be subtle about it!) that will get you marks. also a big BIG plus is concept originality. try writing from second person (not as common as youd think perhaps), as an inanimate object, plant etc. anything like this will make your story stand out. HOWEVER, dont fall into the trap of making the creativity of your story more important than the message.

 

[Sphyx]

I remember reading an example of one in the Standards Packages that the school compiled for us. Basically, this person wrote about the journey in an elevator as an extended metaphor for imaginative journeys. It was very good, really. High-range responce.