Feedback on a Vertigo essay please? (1 Viewer)

[yourbestfriend]

Hey guys, can anyone who did really good in eng adv (preferable a high band 6ish) give me some feedback on my practice base essay for vertigo.
any help is very much appreciated!

 

[pl4smaa21]

there's no essay... is that the joke?

 

[tigerian]

Hey guys, can anyone who did really good in eng adv (preferable a high band 6ish) give me some feedback on my practice base essay for vertigo.
any help is very much appreciated!

i will . See your pm