Free business studies help? (1 Viewer)

[yourbestfriend]

hey, im in year 12 and need some feedback on some draft paragraphs I wrote. Is anyone (who received a band 6 in business studies, or teachers) willing to help me and give feedback on this for free? Your help will honestly be so much appreciated!!

 

[fromthethickofit]

nothing in this world comes for free my man

 

[lunaaaa4403]

hey, im in year 12 and need some feedback on some draft paragraphs I wrote. Is anyone (who received a band 6 in business studies, or teachers) willing to help me and give feedback on this for free? Your help will honestly be so much appreciated!!

$5 and ill do it. if on operations $10 bc im not reliving that hell

 

[200atarprospect]

$5 and ill do it. if on operations $10 bc im not reliving that hell

whats so bad about operations?

 

[lunaaaa4403]

whats so bad about operations?

no its easy its just boring, dw