Help Mee Plzz!! (1 Viewer)

[melliebum]

Hey everyone

I NEED HELP!!!

i am doin my individual on a mother who had a stillborn, its a serious, meaningfull monolouge which i hope to touch the audience in a way that most poeple can relate to loosing somethin.

I need ideas to write in my performance i am struggling!!

Also if anyone wants to comment on if its a gud topic or how to improve it plz do so

Thanks xox Mel

 

[Cyberwaste]

Hi Mel.

This isn't the best subject matter, but I'll try and help. Are you writing the script from scratch? If so, try this as an opener:

"Have you ever tried to hold onto something so tightly, that when you try to release it, it refuses to move? That you not letting it go is the cause of their unseen demise?"

I dunno, just trying to help.