Help with Creative Writing .. (1 Viewer)

[sir-study-alot]

Hi Guys , Its only about 2 weeks to the trials so i have decided i better start my creative writing . i was thinking about doing a piece related to the Aboriginals connection/belonging with the land , maybe a reflection of the history aspect of it . however, im not sure how to structure it or how to start .
please can you give me feeback . good idea or not and how to structure it.
thanks heaps.

 

[Aerath]

Feedback? You haven't done anything for us to give feedback on.

But as for your idea - I think it's good - an idea I just came up with was to begin with like a child's grandparents telling them about an Aboriginal legend. Maybe like 200 words. Then after that, new paragraph, cut to when that child is like an adult - and how the things they've seen and experienced allude to the legend told by that person's grandparents.

OK, it may fly, it may die - but you're not gonna know til you try....

 

[oly1991]

Feedback? You haven't done anything for us to give feedback on.

But as for your idea - I think it's good - an idea I just came up with was to begin with like a child's grandparents telling them about an Aboriginal legend. Maybe like 200 words. Then after that, new paragraph, cut to when that child is like an adult - and how the things they've seen and experienced allude to the legend told by that person's grandparents.

OK, it may fly, it may die - but you're not gonna know til you try....

nice rhyme

 

[sir-study-alot]

Thanks heaps Aerath . Idea sounds great , better than what i was thinking along the lines of anyway. Might go give it a go , thanks.