HELP!!! yes or no? (1 Viewer)

[year12=death]

hey guys.

i am thinking of using snow patrol's "shut your eyes" song as a related text for imaginative journey but im not sure if its a good enough text. anyone agree/disagree with its use? comments would b much appreciated thanks heaps

lara

"Shut Your Eyes"

Shut your eyes and think of somewhere
Somewhere cold and caked in snow
By the fire we break the quiet
Learn to wear each other well

And when the worrying starts to hurt
and the world feels like graves of dirt
Just close your eyes until
you can imagine this place, yeah, our secret space at will

Shut your eyes, I spin the big chair
And you'll feel dizzy, light, and free
And falling gently on the cushion
You can come and sing to me

And when the worrying starts to hurt
and the world feels like graves of dirt
Just close your eyes until
you can imagine this place, yeah, our secret space at will

 

[watatank]

it looks fine. you can use it.

 

[ellen.louise]

Where's the journey? write up a summary and if you can find 3 substantial techniques and back them up with textual evidence, and relate it strongly to the area of study, should be fine.

be careful with using songs: they have very limited capacity to have techniques. it's better to use something else where you can.