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Is this belonging creative writing idea cliched? (2 Viewers)

mike12321

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Hi everyone. I recently handed in a creative writing draft but my teacher said it was too cliche. It was about a young kid in a hospital surrounded by old guys. So yea I kind of have to write a new one for the exam on monday and well I'm not exactly the most creative guy ever. I was thinking about writing one about a kid who goes to soccer/footy training or whatever and everyone marginilises him because his fat. But when someone eventually passes the ball to him hes actually really good then everyone's all nice to him n stuff. Do u think this could work?
 

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