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coolviv6

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Hey

I am not doing too great in english at the moment and am trying to practice writting essays in exam conditions. I am wondering if any of you have spare time can you read my in the wild essay and tell me where i am not strong enough as well as what mark it probably would get me.

Thanks a ton in advance
Jeff
 

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