Poetry (1 Viewer)

[sam04u]

My Poetry........

When You Stare Into Dem Eyes

It was an incredible feat an astronomical phase
when i stared into dem-eyes...for many odd days
i was allured in deluxe...of what i contemplated was there
but now all seems lost and i cant seem to bare.

I was close, my heart stopped pounding and my goal was in reach
subconciously i could hear my main support screech
a hard thick shock repelled me of what i could have had
but what left me feeling happy also left me feeling sad.

A silly thing happened when i threw it all away
everything i could have had because of what i saw that day
i saw dem eyes i thought i knew but owned my an evil guy
this evil man i know and loathe...dem eyes you made me cry

Now i feel like a maggot with my metamorphosis ahead
once again i will be lured in and this time i will be dead
because eventually we all blink when we stare into dem eyes
but no ones been and told the tale so were in for a big surprise.

 

[sam04u]

And another.....



My Pulsating Absolute Centre

in the middle of me,
look in depth and you will see,
is my pulsating absolute centre,
in all of its never shifting tenor,
pride i indoldge in my splendor,
one day the centre will surrender,
because its made of not enough slender,

one only needs to look high to see my eminents
but what is it i acommplished you may wonder
i have done a miracle i have lived and so you ponder
oh what a miracle you have seen life
in all its audacity and pitiful strife
wasting time and working hard for money
look back and find if their is nothing funny

but an apathetic man reminisces
a life he led full of stresses
never had real security
hes next day was in joyfull ambiguity
when hes centre is closed it will be because he cant keep it open anymore
for him its a pleasure and not an unbearable chore
he leads life in full falore,
everything is sweet galore

we both have equal is our accomplishment
we built the base of our life with cement,
our centres are all different they all do different things,
but they are build on the same ground,
as you can see on the bottom of my pulsating absolute centre
its smooth and there are no mounds

when it closes were all sad
inside others feel bad
they think of life we could have had
and so they think about when theres will meet the same fate
their bodys absolutely hate
the inevitable destiny
of their centres mortality

 

[trumpet geek]

NIce. Er.... um... do u want me to write a song or sumfing wif them?

 

[moon_styla]

maybe he posted it in the wrong thread? and now he cant find it tehehe

 

[pristine]

moon_styla (?)

are u jennifer's brother?
i think you are. the one who went to my primary school SSPS?

 

[dannyboy_588]

here...

everyone have a haiku

The problem is you
Over the penguin is love
Help me kill the night.

 

[timyates_87]

whaaaa??????? stay off the drugs buddy :uhhuh:

HOW THE HELL IS THIS RELATED TO MUSIC!!

 

[dannyboy_588]

okay....

one thing: drugs are illegal, and i am not socially retarded enough to need to use them to enjoy myself OR be weird...

I am plenty weird enough by myself...

It's called absurdist poetry by the way...

secondly: this isn't related to music, but it's here, so i posted...

 

[moon_styla]

are u jennifer's brother?
i think you are. the one who went to my primary school SSPS?

WHAT DA HELL?!?!?!?! WHO ARE YOU!! LOL...










umm yes i am :S

 

[pristine]

lol i use to hang around your sister in primary school.
ask her if she remembers someone called "christine" that plays the piano and ask her if she remembers janice and casey also.

 

[moon_styla]

hmmm so weird.. coz i know janice and casey really well... casey was backstage for the international piano comp so i met her a few times and i used to go out with fiona so i met her sister janice heapz of times lol!! but you... well ummm lol im sooo soo sorry but yeh.. have i seen u in real life?

hrmmmm il ask her about u hehe

 

[pristine]

tis a small small world.
i would have no idea if you know me or not. i don't really mind,
i'm not a really social person..
yeh i saw casey recently, piano players bah.

 

[ujuphleg]

Guys please stop spamming and talk through PM's. Ta.