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Heys,
I just quickly read over your essay. Well honestly its great but you need to also incoporate the key themes and issues that arise within institutions. You have covered some aspects of how an individual can be institutionalized however you have missed on significant issues such as 'Compliance & Rebellion', 'Friendship & Bullying', 'Trust & Betrayal', Individuality & Conformity', 'Use & Abuse of power', 'Rehabilitation & Punishment'.
I suggest you also learn off a few more quotes to show your depth and knowledge of this text.
Great work though looks as though you are a high achiever, keep it up!!
If you need anymore help just let me noe, i'll be more than happy to help you! (divine_latina@hotmail.com)
Take it easy and Goodluck with your studies.
Cindy.R
I just quickly read over your essay. Well honestly its great but you need to also incoporate the key themes and issues that arise within institutions. You have covered some aspects of how an individual can be institutionalized however you have missed on significant issues such as 'Compliance & Rebellion', 'Friendship & Bullying', 'Trust & Betrayal', Individuality & Conformity', 'Use & Abuse of power', 'Rehabilitation & Punishment'.
I suggest you also learn off a few more quotes to show your depth and knowledge of this text.
Great work though looks as though you are a high achiever, keep it up!!
If you need anymore help just let me noe, i'll be more than happy to help you! (divine_latina@hotmail.com)
Take it easy and Goodluck with your studies.
Cindy.R