Skittled
What did the crab do?
Right, so, it's crunch time. This is what I've drafted. Essentially, John and Hayden are awesome managers. Nick's an asshole who's come in and tried to take away our breaks. The company has alwyas kept us back after 5pm for the tills to be counted, which, according to the award is illegal, and we should be paid for: I've recently had extensive (and heated) conversations with Gavin (area manager).
As a business student, I'd not have gone past getting the experiences I've gotten at DSE -- it's been an awesome time in that regard. However, as an employee, it sucks...
Could you read it over and give me any thoughts?
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To Whom It May Concern:
I am writing to give 24 hours’ notice of my resignation, as set out in the casual contract of employment (effective 14/08/03). My employment at Dick Smith Electronics has been highly educational, not only in the product and sales knowledge required for my position, but also in providing insight into the operations of a medium-sized retail business. I am highly grateful to my managers and assistant managers for sharing their time and thoughts on various issues in the past, and for their attempts to involve employees in decisions and changes.
I would like to commend and thank John XXXX and Hayden XXXX for their excellent management of the Hornsby store for a large portion of my employment period – their management style was friendly and non-confrontational, spurning excellent attitudes and relationships with staff, without compromising efficiency and effectiveness. Similarly, I’d like to thank our new manager Nick XXXX for our recent educational conversations, and providing a different perspective to management: I wish him luck in future and his management of the Hornsby store. Gavin XXXX has always been accommodating in his time and advice, and our conversations have been very informative and educational; I thank him for this.
I wish the all best to the staff at Hornsby, with their excellent product knowledge and unsurpassed friendliness, making work just that little less stressful and even occasionally, entertaining; best of luck to all, and I hope to see you sometime in the future!
My time at DSE has been an experience which will not be forgotten.
Yours Sincerely,
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As a business student, I'd not have gone past getting the experiences I've gotten at DSE -- it's been an awesome time in that regard. However, as an employee, it sucks...
Could you read it over and give me any thoughts?
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To Whom It May Concern:
I am writing to give 24 hours’ notice of my resignation, as set out in the casual contract of employment (effective 14/08/03). My employment at Dick Smith Electronics has been highly educational, not only in the product and sales knowledge required for my position, but also in providing insight into the operations of a medium-sized retail business. I am highly grateful to my managers and assistant managers for sharing their time and thoughts on various issues in the past, and for their attempts to involve employees in decisions and changes.
I would like to commend and thank John XXXX and Hayden XXXX for their excellent management of the Hornsby store for a large portion of my employment period – their management style was friendly and non-confrontational, spurning excellent attitudes and relationships with staff, without compromising efficiency and effectiveness. Similarly, I’d like to thank our new manager Nick XXXX for our recent educational conversations, and providing a different perspective to management: I wish him luck in future and his management of the Hornsby store. Gavin XXXX has always been accommodating in his time and advice, and our conversations have been very informative and educational; I thank him for this.
I wish the all best to the staff at Hornsby, with their excellent product knowledge and unsurpassed friendliness, making work just that little less stressful and even occasionally, entertaining; best of luck to all, and I hope to see you sometime in the future!
My time at DSE has been an experience which will not be forgotten.
Yours Sincerely,
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