Short story editing (1 Viewer)

[Selinaah]

Hi,

I have a short story due tomorrow and I was wondering if someone would be kind enough to edit for me. It is only 500 words and less and I need it done in about less than one hour. I promise it's really short it's not even one word document page. I need feedback on it too and where I can improve.

Please let me know asap

 

[strawberrye]

You are more than welcome to send it to my email-strawberrye@live.com.au, I would be happy to give you some feedback on it