Okay, so i got my content, structure and evidence, but i can never receive a band 6 because my language in my essays are always not sophisticated enough and my teachers say that i don't have my argument on the flow and my writing style is 'too kind'... like do need to use some terminology within my essay or something?
I really need to develop these skills to make my language more sophisticated to make it at the top band 6 level! (since majority of my subjects i choose in yr 11 and 12 are mainly English related and alot of essay writing)
Please help me!
I really need to develop these skills to make my language more sophisticated to make it at the top band 6 level! (since majority of my subjects i choose in yr 11 and 12 are mainly English related and alot of essay writing)
Please help me!
