Psychosomatical
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Hey,
i've chopped and changed my AOS essay for months, latest structure is a little.. different..
I have 4 text, Two of Strzynecki's Poems, and two texts of my own.
My three main point are (generally)
Interaction with Society
Connection Culture
Involvement in Romantic relationships
Way my essay structure goes is... Strzynecki's Poem (1 Paragraph), My first chosen text (2 Paragraphs). < -- These both are integrated under Interaction with Society.
Next Paragraph is my second Strzynecki falling under Culture ( 1 Paragraph)
Lastly for Romantic Relationships I have my chosen film ( 1 Paragraph)
All up 6 Paragraphs + Conc and Intro.
Yay or Nay? Should i just stick with 2 para's for each idea or do epople often mix it up like this?... Thanks.
i've chopped and changed my AOS essay for months, latest structure is a little.. different..
I have 4 text, Two of Strzynecki's Poems, and two texts of my own.
My three main point are (generally)
Interaction with Society
Connection Culture
Involvement in Romantic relationships
Way my essay structure goes is... Strzynecki's Poem (1 Paragraph), My first chosen text (2 Paragraphs). < -- These both are integrated under Interaction with Society.
Next Paragraph is my second Strzynecki falling under Culture ( 1 Paragraph)
Lastly for Romantic Relationships I have my chosen film ( 1 Paragraph)
All up 6 Paragraphs + Conc and Intro.
Yay or Nay? Should i just stick with 2 para's for each idea or do epople often mix it up like this?... Thanks.
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