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Suggestions for my essay (Emma/Clueless) (1 Viewer)

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This was my response for an assessment task that we did last term, I got 23/30... now english isn't my strongest subject as you can tell from that (I'm ranked around the middle of the grade) but I was just wondering if anyone wouldn't mind making a few suggestions for improvements... the comment from the marker was "short but insightful" lol. The question was pretty generic... something like "How has the process of transformation been shown through your prescribed texts." But I don't actually remember it.

Thanks guys :)

Edit: I'm doing Emma and Clueless
 

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