Giant Lobster
Active Member
Most of the time, when i read someone elses MW, i see their wording and language ability, imagery, metaphors etc and think to myself "yeah in theory i can do that... in theory."
Then when i try, it looks so shit. So then I look back at the example and think hard about why im so crap. Then i try again; still shit.
And uno that fragmented text effect u do in works that reflect pomo and stuff, i can never do that properly. dunno why.
Hey, anyone have the problem of running out of words? e.g. permeated, infused, suffused, flooded, and im out. Dunno why but when I use the same word twice within close proximity, it looks lame. And I sometimes use "complex" inappropriately, e.g. no-one would say "he stood stagnant"... u just dont use that word to describe standing. but technically it makes sense. i dunno how to describe my problem. a lack of natural language ability i guess![Frown :( :(](data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7)
Then when i try, it looks so shit. So then I look back at the example and think hard about why im so crap. Then i try again; still shit.
And uno that fragmented text effect u do in works that reflect pomo and stuff, i can never do that properly. dunno why.
Hey, anyone have the problem of running out of words? e.g. permeated, infused, suffused, flooded, and im out. Dunno why but when I use the same word twice within close proximity, it looks lame. And I sometimes use "complex" inappropriately, e.g. no-one would say "he stood stagnant"... u just dont use that word to describe standing. but technically it makes sense. i dunno how to describe my problem. a lack of natural language ability i guess