Good going, honestly, "just can't write about it well at all" is vague and ambiguous.
Any specific problem?
Or did you just need someone to whip your lazy ass into shape to actually start thinking/planning/writing the essay, and wanted to disguise it in the form of a distressed, grammatically incorrect spiel?
well iv written like six or seven essays on it exploring different connections and they were all horribly shit. i just cant see any similarities between the two, apart from like the scenes that pacino explores