Discovery 1st Person Creative (1 Viewer)

[sedrickhead]

Hey all, I created a discovery story and wrote it in first person, my teacher said it was good however there is a section where my character has a conversation with another character and she said that it was too much dialogue. I was told to change the story to 3rd person or use more figurative language to reflect on the conversation, I'm just curious how would I use figurative language to do this.

Thanks

 

[MrSir]

Hey all, I created a discovery story and wrote it in first person, my teacher said it was good however there is a section where my character has a conversation with another character and she said that it was too much dialogue. I was told to change the story to 3rd person or use more figurative language to reflect on the conversation, I'm just curious how would I use figurative language to do this.

Thanks

I can help you. There is a message about how to do this in your PM and what is required to achieve that . I have said similar things my own students