Recent content by riamu

either "I tried to" or "They took my". It's a toss up.

yay people exist!! I am doing a piece on the beauty of the cosmos, related to the sci fi module of english extension 1.

All of that said, in general, so many commas are unnecessary. Write daily and you will get better. Also, get as many people reading your poetry as possible - advice is your bffl.

oh but I am!

So I'm doin' performance poetry, all goin' good and such but... it's a little bit lonely out here? :cold: ie. My teacher has never taught/marked performance poetry, head of english has no examples, BOS has no standard packages for it, I've only found one major here (without reflection statement...