not everyone does though
i was just reading a poll whether people supported this 'Occupy Sydney' campaign
and 70% said no
u just get those odd dole bludges who are in envy of the richer echelon for working hard
well,
i think you would agree that, in comparison to America, our gap is fairly favourable
we don't suffer from borderline poverty like some of them do
so i think, where its at now is at an acceptable level
it would come to a communal consensus whether it is or not
no
im happy to hear other people out and am open to re-shaping my belief through further knowledge
the end bit was just giving a brief on how i stand at this present time
dw
u made a good decision thinking one up on the spot
they appreciate it more
+ i think the creative writing b6 cut off will be significantly lower this year
heaps of people made their stories on connections to people rather than place and either:
1. did the same as u
2. regurgitated it...
lol u guise...
this isnt modern history (i agree)
Paragraph Structure:
Opening statement (1 - 2 lines)
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Themes (7 - 8+ lines) - context can be moulded inbetween ocassionally
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id say its 20% context 80% text