This.... is quite ordinary.... there's really no storyline and the use of onomatopoeia is very cliche. It's quite difficult to read because you also keep shifting between past and present tense. There's also a lot of grammatical and spelling errors. It needs a lot of work but otherwise, keep it up!!
Hi! If anyone needs past papers for Advanced English, I have a folder of papers based around the NEW SYLLABUS which I am selling.
They have been created by myself, teachers, HSC markers and heads of department.
What's included:
- Over 100 papers + Answers;
- Exam Tips;
- SECTION 1 short answer...
bump..I really did struggle to find accurate information when applying last year - good to see an account actually giving information :biglaugh: :biglaugh: