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hi, here it is, i dont like it but please let me know what you think. P.S. the name of the work is 'in search of a dream' but i have put both the edited and the 'author's preferred' (2000 words too long) editons on my site. so be sure to click on the 'submitted version to see the right one...

who else got burned by that crap word limit? seriously, 5000 words for that much work is a joke. i could have easily done 10. but instead ended up cutting all of the nice 'soft' joining bits out and now my work reads like a punch in the face. i was so cut to find that when i still felt that...