My Major Work (1 Viewer)

[Webdoggy]

hi,
here it is, i dont like it but please let me know what you think.

P.S. the name of the work is 'in search of a dream' but i have put both the edited and the 'author's preferred' (2000 words too long) editons on my site.
so be sure to click on the 'submitted version to see the right one.

www.geocities.com/whotookwebby/work.html